Observation Burning Haibun

The first thing apparent is that old comfort grown under white light and dark skies. Orange voices and the jumps of a basketball, the sharp shock of stuttered laughter that springs to meet the evening as old friends in a clamoring bar. Vague, fuzzy outlines indicate the presence of a million minds. We are in a cathedral, the tangy air of excitement ringing out, banging off the walls and permeating through the glass; a window offers only clarity and observation.

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first      under white light                             Orange          shock of     laughter 

                                                                     meet the evening          friends       indicate 

     a                             cathedral                                                                                       the glass offers observation.

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first      under                 laughter

friends      presence                    a cathedral

                   glass    observation

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Mazie Reidy
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